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"Where's the keys?" Where are the keys? It actually says that Charlotte digs through her pockets and hands them to him.

Actually, magicman, I kind of am. You'll have to wait and see. I knew I wanted to end it like I did for this chapter becuase if I kept going ...

Thanks a lot, you guys!! I'm not sure if I should update...should I?

Have you ever felt so in love with someone that you'd do anything for them? That you'd even murder? I guess that's how it is with my relationship with Patrick. ...

Hey JCobsessed!! It's nice to meet you. Avenged Sevenfold are one of the most amazing bands I've ever heard. Syn and Zacky are the most amazing guitar players I've ever ...

Hey Night Mistress! Thanks for reading. I 'preciate it. To answer your question, I don't know. I think it was because I got so into the story that I felt ...

Yeah, I have a habit of making everything one paragraph. I'm trying to break it. And wow, I hadn't noticed that I made it seem like it was just his ...

"Kelsey," he said. I closed my eyes and covered my face with my hands. "Kelsey," he repeated, "look at me. We need to talk." I sighed. Slowly and reluctantly I ...

Hey Ani! Music is definitely one of the best things ever created. It's like, my drug. LOL. As for my brothers, we used to play games and stuff but we ...

This is really good. I like how you leave us hanging like that. I myself haven't ever been able to pull it off well, but this is perfect. Like scrambled_pages ...

Um, yes, I believe so. I don't really pay attention to what kinds of music I'm playing in band, I just play it.

The Beatles are one of the most amazing bands that ever recorded in the studio (aka I LOVE THEM. Ever seen I Am Sam?). Um, the music that I play ...

No, I haven't, but I will in highschool. When they took us on a tour there we got to go in the dark room, but only for a second. :(

I think it was great, but you did the period thing again. Remember, if you're saying something like, Bekka turned to him and said, "Blah blah" (hypothetical) then don't capitalize ...

I'm pretty sure that you're supposed to put commas instead of periods, like: “Ten thousand, my lord,” said the man. The figure took a step toward the men. “Is that ...